Setting:for my mystery story I will be making my main setting my house I choose this as I know my house really well due to the fact that I have live in this house for about 3 years.

Opening: I will open my story in the park in front of my house and I will be joined by my good friend Brian we will start by playing football but then I will end the opening paragraph with me going back to my house.

Fiction Trigger: I will hear my front door open and close but also something scratch the door I will say it made an extraterrestrial noise but I wont tell them what it is this will make my reader think I am dealing with an alien but in fact my dead dog.

Development: I will start a 2 to 3 paragraph development which will include high amounts of description and I will also try my best to pace my writing as best as possible I will be playing video games and going to the kitchen during in the 3 paragraphs to make it more friendly of an environment.

Climax:I hear something walking up and go into my closet so I get of my chair and slowly walk to the closet and I will add a dramatic feeling. I open the closet and my old dog jumps on me and completely destroys my face in the way I hit my table which has my tv on top, my tv falls and hits the dog in the head this somehow killed him i get the phone and call 999 and ask for an ambulance(put … at end of paragraph)

Conclusion:back to present day and i say ‘nowadays every single time i look into the mirror i think i am looking straight at the devil, ive lost everything my friends the rest of my family but if it wasnt for my mother, father and sister I would have probably had taken my life already.

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